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	<title>Comments on: On Writing: Wordy equals weak!</title>
	<link>http://karmawilson.com/goodkarma/2008/02/17/on-writing-wordy-equals-weak/</link>
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		<title>By: Traci Smith</title>
		<link>http://karmawilson.com/goodkarma/2008/02/17/on-writing-wordy-equals-weak/#comment-1371</link>
		<dc:creator>Traci Smith</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 21 Feb 2008 03:03:05 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I found this very helpful Karma.  I agree with the over-use of "that"...I find myself doing it a lot.  When I look back over things I've written I eliminate lots of "that's",  lol.  : )
I have also found coming up with more muscular words a fun challenge.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I found this very helpful Karma.  I agree with the over-use of &#8220;that&#8221;&#8230;I find myself doing it a lot.  When I look back over things I&#8217;ve written I eliminate lots of &#8220;that&#8217;s&#8221;,  lol.  : )<br />
I have also found coming up with more muscular words a fun challenge.</p>
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		<title>By: Kathy Salazar</title>
		<link>http://karmawilson.com/goodkarma/2008/02/17/on-writing-wordy-equals-weak/#comment-1356</link>
		<dc:creator>Kathy Salazar</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 19 Feb 2008 19:30:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Very good advice and as one who loves writing reviews of wonderful books, such as yours, it is advice I'll take to heart!!
......Make it a great day....kath</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Very good advice and as one who loves writing reviews of wonderful books, such as yours, it is advice I&#8217;ll take to heart!!<br />
&#8230;&#8230;Make it a great day&#8230;.kath</p>
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		<title>By: Kathryn</title>
		<link>http://karmawilson.com/goodkarma/2008/02/17/on-writing-wordy-equals-weak/#comment-1338</link>
		<dc:creator>Kathryn</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 18 Feb 2008 18:48:54 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for dropping by my blog. I hope that others follow the link from it to this post since it's a really great read! I particularly think that the point about using muscular words is a good one. There are so many terrific descriptive words out there and we so often skip over them in favor of the words we're used to using.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for dropping by my blog. I hope that others follow the link from it to this post since it&#8217;s a really great read! I particularly think that the point about using muscular words is a good one. There are so many terrific descriptive words out there and we so often skip over them in favor of the words we&#8217;re used to using.</p>
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		<title>By: What a Writer is Reading on the Web, 2/17/08 &#124; Real Words</title>
		<link>http://karmawilson.com/goodkarma/2008/02/17/on-writing-wordy-equals-weak/#comment-1326</link>
		<dc:creator>What a Writer is Reading on the Web, 2/17/08 &#124; Real Words</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 17 Feb 2008 17:22:27 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://karmawilson.com/goodkarma/2008/02/17/on-writing-wordy-equals-weak/#comment-1326</guid>
		<description>[...] Wordy Equals Weak @ Good Karma [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[&#8230;] Wordy Equals Weak @ Good Karma [&#8230;]</p>
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		<title>By: Kelly @ Love Well</title>
		<link>http://karmawilson.com/goodkarma/2008/02/17/on-writing-wordy-equals-weak/#comment-1325</link>
		<dc:creator>Kelly @ Love Well</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 17 Feb 2008 16:25:49 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://karmawilson.com/goodkarma/2008/02/17/on-writing-wordy-equals-weak/#comment-1325</guid>
		<description>Great tips, Karma. I used to work in the TV news business, where simple-yet-strong writing is (supposed to be) the rule. But I've gotten shamefully out of practice as of late.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great tips, Karma. I used to work in the TV news business, where simple-yet-strong writing is (supposed to be) the rule. But I&#8217;ve gotten shamefully out of practice as of late.</p>
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